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Friday 22 February 2019

Lost ted.

WALT use a picture prompt to write a story.


Lost ted.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     One day i was walking down the sidewalk with my teddy named ted and my mum. He has a nice red velvet bow and he is a lite white collar.We are just going to KFC to get a feed i said to my mum can i get a popcorn chicken lunch? But then he crumbled out of my hands and fell on the wet soggy ground without me knowing. Then when we arrived at KFC we placed our order now we are eating it is so good. Then when i went to put ted on the red Sofa. He was not there i told my mum that ted is lost.I imagine in my head how wet and soggy he is. We then went to look for him i was worried because he is all alone and he has never be alone be for. We didn't find him I started to cry. Ted is like my best friend. I have a plan to find him i told my mum I said to her we should put up a flyer to see if someone has found him. We made a flyer with a picture of me and Ted on it and mums phone number. We then stuck the flyer around the streets on power poles. 4 days later someone rang up mum and said i have found your sons Teddy bear. The lady said to mum would you be able to pick him up now? I am guessing your son would really love to have him back. Mum then said let’s go for a walk I grabbed my helmet and bike and of we went. Mum didn't tell me where we were going just that we were going for a walk. We then turned up at a house that i didn't know. I asked mum what are we doing here? We knocked on the door and the lady welcomed us in. I saw Ted on the sofa he was washed and dry like nothing was wrong with him. I was so glad to see him we thanked the lady so much for finding my best friend. Thank you I enjoy doing these word challengers.

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