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Friday 8 June 2018

Creative Writing.

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 word were pink huge bridge speinkled and daffodil. Hi there my name is Tom and i am in the hospital and i black out for 4 days and i am going to war in 4 days and i don't want to go but i am going to go to fight for my country.4 days after i went to the huber and then i went on the big boat the boat called hold 4,0000 people and there were 2 boats so that is 8,0000 people all together.the days came on the boat 4 days it took to get there then we arrived at vetnamer then the war began we had to walk on a Bridge and there was a rapid ander neth us.then we went we had to dig aro own chrenchis and we had no backup then there was a huge canin that fiidid at us we were almost finished but it blow up the grand then more dirt came in the creche then we ceped on digging then we finish we all jumped in then we all started to shot then i got shot i was the 900 prusin to get shot i pass away then we won the war the war was 2 years then Daffodil grow on the war bass then a pink fairy came and sprinkled some poshin on me then i came back to life then i said what happened.Then i said how do i get home she said i will get a boat i said how i will just imagined it oh ok i said then she said run it is waiting for you ok then i ran my little heat out.Then i got to the boat then i jumped on the boat then they took me to my home town.Then i seen all my friends then i said hi how are you going they replied i am good they said me i said good.