The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
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Friday, 18 May 2018
My Magical Creature 100 WC
WALT describe a magical creature that lives in a pink lake of aniaml hospital.
The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
Friday, 11 May 2018
Rata and the Waka.
We have been doing some critical thinking with the story of Rata and his Waka
Tuesday, 6 March 2018
Learning Goals Template 2018
Thursday, 23 November 2017
Friday, 22 September 2017
The piano
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old mans point of view as he recalls his memories .
Hello I am playing my very old piano in 2017 24 of September and I am in a very dark room and I remembering my family I am very sad because some of my family has died and I want to remember my family that has died the first person that I thought of was my wife then my first teardrop came out of my blue eyes and then another teardrop came out of my eye again so then more cept coming and then I thought of something and this one was about the world war one of my brothers went to war so did I it was not fun went at October 2018 I said to my please don’t died he was going to go by himself but then someone poshed me on the buot
Hello I am playing my very old piano in 2017 24 of September and I am in a very dark room and I remembering my family I am very sad because some of my family has died and I want to remember my family that has died the first person that I thought of was my wife then my first teardrop came out of my blue eyes and then another teardrop came out of my eye again so then more cept coming and then I thought of something and this one was about the world war one of my brothers went to war so did I it was not fun went at October 2018 I said to my please don’t died he was going to go by himself but then someone poshed me on the buot
Te ngahere
walt about te ngahere the rakau the kararehe the manu and the risks to the fotest .
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Thursday, 24 August 2017
Week#45 100 Word challenge
Week#45
World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.
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As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:
… as it came rushing towards us we…
12.01pm, Wednesday, 24 July. I was driving down the rocky road, then I saw some bubbling water. “Hmmm” I said to myself, “Why is that there?”
I went down the steep hill and then I saw people running from the tsunami. WOW that is big! Then it started to come rushing towards me and then I said “AAAAAAAA?” I turned around quickly and I zoomed off. I went to my old,house with trees everywhere. I packed my bag and I got some food. I went to my messy backyard but then it was too late I had drowned.
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