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Friday, 18 May 2018

My Magical Creature 100 WC

WALT describe a magical creature that lives in a pink lake of aniaml hospital. 


  The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.





Friday, 11 May 2018

Rata and the Waka.

We have been doing some critical thinking with the story of Rata and his Waka

Friday, 22 September 2017

The piano

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old mans point of view as he recalls his memories .
Hello I am playing my very old piano in 2017 24 of September and I am in a  very dark room and I remembering my family  I am very sad because some of my family has died and I want to remember my family that has died the first person that I thought of was my wife then my first teardrop came out of my blue eyes and then another teardrop came out of my eye again so then more  cept coming and then I thought of something  and this one was about the world war one of my brothers went to  war so did I it was not fun went at October 2018 I said to my please don’t died he was going to go by himself but then someone poshed me on the buot

Te ngahere

walt about te ngahere the rakau the kararehe the manu and the risks to the fotest  .



Thursday, 24 August 2017

Week#45 100 Word challenge

Week#45



World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

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As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
12.01pm, Wednesday, 24 July.  I was driving down the  rocky road, then I saw some  bubbling water. “Hmmm” I said to myself, “Why is that there?”
I went down the  steep hill and then I saw people running from the tsunami. WOW that is big!  Then it started to come rushing towards me and then I said “AAAAAAAA?” I turned around quickly and  I zoomed off. I went to my old,house with trees everywhere. I packed my bag and I got some food. I went to my messy backyard but then it was too late  I had drowned.