I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas
Showing posts with label tuhituhi. Show all posts
Showing posts with label tuhituhi. Show all posts
Friday, 30 August 2019
RenderForest
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Time to create some imagery...
For our writing this term we are learning how to create poems / Rotarota or creative paragraphs. We get a new hook each day. Here are some of my pieces of writing. We are especially focusing on imagery and using our senses and using our senses
Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Ruin
Ruin
Hi my name is Ruin and I am in another diemengin and it is broken and destroyed here.I Have to get a device to save the world. I can see the rusty cars on the highway from the rooftops and I can see vines going everywhere up on the building's the grand is all soggy and the water is all mude and brown and there is a lot of bugs herelike mixtos,flies and bees the more I breathe the more fumis go in my system -I get more tired I saw a big steel box so that I have been looking for many years.I pushed it out of the window and then it hit the grand it made a bang. I kicked the steel box and then the door opened and it smelt like it had been there for years and years.I saw a mini flat ipad I could see through it .I have not had the time to be charged so I trend it on and my and my skin was going light blue.Then I heard a spaceship I ran as fast as could I kept running to my motorbike I got to it and I turned it on then drive away the spaceship followed me it dropped two little mini robot’s they were firing bullets at me but they were bad shootersI saw a sign that said tunnel this was. I went as fast as I could I. Had bombs I scraped it on my bike and then I dropped it. The bad guy’s robots died but it only killed one.Then Game the other one kept chasing me. I kept going I got to the tunnel I went in and it was as dark as the night sky I turned my light on then kept staring.
I saw the end so I got my other bomb out and dropped it as I got out boom they exploded .I thought I lost the mather ship but I didn't I saw I come out for the bottom. Of the brig I saw a ramp going to the spaceship I went up it and jumped on it and then I pulled my metal white sword out and jumped in the air and stabbed the ship and it falls.Then hits the ground hard so does my bike I get up and .
Monday, 18 February 2019
Wanted Poster
Friday, 18 May 2018
My Magical Creature 100 WC
WALT describe a magical creature that lives in a pink lake of aniaml hospital.
The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
Friday, 22 September 2017
The piano
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old mans point of view as he recalls his memories .
Hello I am playing my very old piano in 2017 24 of September and I am in a very dark room and I remembering my family I am very sad because some of my family has died and I want to remember my family that has died the first person that I thought of was my wife then my first teardrop came out of my blue eyes and then another teardrop came out of my eye again so then more cept coming and then I thought of something and this one was about the world war one of my brothers went to war so did I it was not fun went at October 2018 I said to my please don’t died he was going to go by himself but then someone poshed me on the buot
Hello I am playing my very old piano in 2017 24 of September and I am in a very dark room and I remembering my family I am very sad because some of my family has died and I want to remember my family that has died the first person that I thought of was my wife then my first teardrop came out of my blue eyes and then another teardrop came out of my eye again so then more cept coming and then I thought of something and this one was about the world war one of my brothers went to war so did I it was not fun went at October 2018 I said to my please don’t died he was going to go by himself but then someone poshed me on the buot
Tuesday, 27 June 2017
My Updated Learning Goals 2017
This Term I have updated my learning goals in Tuhituhi, Pangarau, Panui Pukapuka but my personal goal is still the same.
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