WALT describe a magical creature that lives in a pink lake of aniaml hospital.
The half human and half robot story. I was walking in the desert, and then I came across an emergency centre then. I called For help but they didn't here me so I went closer to the emergency centre then the people herd me . they said come over then I seen a pink swamp in my head I was think that. something that would come out of the swamp and eat me. Man at this time I was thinking what is in that hospital there could be dragons in there so then they walked me in.Then there was big half human and half robot and then.
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Friday, 18 May 2018
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This is amazing because it is a great picture of the cyborg, and I really enjoyed your writing.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of the Terminator, when he had just been blown up by the fuel truck.
Next time you could think about using a dark colour like black or blue so everyone can read it, especially color blind people.
Why did you choose the robot to write about?